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Hi Kitty, I really like what you've got going on here. I have a tendency to think that EVERYTHING needs a chorus... so I would agree with the others that you should add one. I also think your hook should be "You Have My Heart"... then I would use your current Verse 2 as Verse 1 , your current Verse 3 as Verse 2, and I would take a few lines from Verse 1 and turn it into a chorus... or you could come up with an entirely new chorus to support the hook and use some of the lines from verse one to form a bridge. Good stuff, here. Keep at it  Heather
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