Starts off with a real good "Zac Brown" feel, but goes its own way nicely. Singing is pretty dang good, probably need some guidance on where to do those voice "breaky" things and maybe some phrasing -- but it all sounds good to me.

I know you are going for that "ring", so I feel the lyrics seem a little "unfocused" or maybe repetitious. I think you need to decide where you want to take this story. It is basically "happy" song about how the world is beating you down into a total pulp. Nothing is going right, you are complaining and you never give yourself any way out. You've had "enough of these days", but then at the end you are happy with what you have. There is a real conflict of messages in here.

By the way, singing is a pretty hot commodity -- you probably will be able to find collaborators here, if you so wish.

Just a couple of thoughts.


Kevin

Last edited by Kevin Emmrich; 10/12/10 02:47 PM.
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