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Tweaks below, keep or sweep  Verse 1 They had lived Living on love, oh, their life was sweet, Thought they had everything they'd ever need.. Verse 2 Four kids later life had got became real hard, Worked a 14 hour day s to keep up with the farm, They'd quarrel and Sometimes they'd fight, he would sleep alone, Chorus He took a one way walk to greener pasture, Bent the fence, stepped across the line, A one way walk to greener pasture,( I'd replace this line to avoid song ID confusion) The Muddy fields were muddy on the other side, No the grass werewasn't green when he got there.. Woke up sweatin'.. what a nightmare.... Bridge No thing on earth was worthone could replace his wife and fam'ly, He might'a been lonely but he was in love.... Verse 3 He got off the couch went it to talk to his wife, Said we need to talk we both know too many things ain't right,
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