Hi Robert,
You've got alot of great suggestions. Go with your gut!

I'll add to your confusion LOL! Sorry, I'm almost always a 1st person writer therefore suggester too. I think it gives a song more impact if you can, but that's me! I like to make it seem personal if I can. I'd loose the bar room kereoke and keep it about either driving or riding in that car to emphasize that great chorus/ hook!

I also think radio is more fitting than stereo in a country song, may just be me! I played around with v1 as an example. Keep or toss any or all. Good luck with this!


Verse
Country TUNES HAVE BEEN good to me

THAT MUSIC PLAYS AND SOON I"M SINGIN'

AN UPBEAT SONG OR SAD FIDDLE AND STEEL

MELODY WILL PLAY ABOUT THE WAY I'M FEELIN'

SOON I'M JACKED WHEN that sound fills the car

I KICK BACK like I'M THE NEXT Nashville star

RELAXED, MY WORRIES GONE, FEELIN' SO STOKED

I CAN'T REMEMBER HOW I DROVE HOME





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