Ron; Reverend James, and Devilman Jim?
I believe these two know each other. Great wordsmithing on Jim! The only thing I saw that tripped me up on James was where it said "Was seldom locked before"
"before the church was torched by hate"
Seems like it would word better if you said
Was seldom locked before
UNTIL the church was torched by hate. I've been called on doing this before, using the same words in succession. Sometimes it works sometimes it works in spite of what others say. Anyway, both songs excellent, as usual.
How do you write so many?
Randy Wimberley