HiDee Bro Roy!

This IS Overall Fun..tho I dunno 'bout that "sore" point makin' a Potential Matchup overly-interested.

The "ordinary/extraordinary" rhyme isn't too-fabulous, JMO.

It overall hit me as maybe TOO Testosterone-Laced..(But..maybe if ya made a DUET out of it/penned a Gal's Eye View of what his Co-Hort might be thinking SHE'd be doing to HIM, this could be the start of something big.)

Good Luck with it! Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan