Terry, Thanks for the feedback, I will fix the spelling mistakes before I put the lyrics on my website.
I started to explain why I made the changes then decided it wasn't important and stopped.

Geneve, Thanks for the great suggestions for the song. I like the bridge one the best.
I plan on using the song for background music on the history page. Hopeful the lyrics will tell the story in 4 or 5 minutes with some pictures. (still working on that) I'm sure I will make some more changes before I spend money to record it. The tough part is trying to tell the true story. That's why I changed the title from (livin in the country) to (lived a little country life). My dad passed away somewhat young, My mom lives in town, and I still live in L A. We all put up a little hay, Here I am trying to explain myself. I guest it is important, I alway learn something when I get feedback, thanks again for taking the time to offer feedback. something I'm not very good at. The house had asphalt siding on it and it was ugly.


Scott Steven Walters

Goodfolks link below
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=817195