Hi Andy

Nice track, all good advice given to you already.

Quick notes get those drums in sooner, right on the second line even... or don't do anything until the chorus, the rim shots leading in are weakening it.

I liked the chorus, leading up to it wasn't as effective as we'd like it to be. The mellow change was terrific. Could be a good song for film/TV in my mind if pitching it eventually is something your thinking about. Waited for the "Freebird" thing to come that Zeek mentioned and it never came. smile

All the best


Thanks!
Peace Mike
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