Hi Mackie,

Wow! You've made a lot of very nice changes and additions! I really appreciate it and want to take the time to go through all of your work carefully. This weekend, though, is absolutely packed with out-of-town guests and I don't have the time to give it the detailed attention I want to give it. I got four hours of sleep last night and am falling asleep as I type now! This lyric is about a very real and special person, and I am looking forward to reflecting upon and studying each of your suggestions and returning on Monday with fresh eyes and thoughts!

Thanks so much!
Lisa