Originally Posted by R. Shayne Vaughan
Hey Fran, IMO, this is your best song to date!

My only tweaks:
Slick and snowy highway on that fateful night
Speeding car, drunken driver, ran the red light


Hi Shayne, thank you for the excellent suggestions. This
lyric, has had some awesome comments in the past to help
bring it this far. I plan to have a good quality demo made
when I can get it ready for music. I really do appreciate
you and your talents..Thanks again..

Moments to cry for,
Fran Williams


"Dreamin' Big Dreams", Wake Up And Go For Them smile