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by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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The first 2 lines confuse me, A crack in the wall or crack as a substance? You might consider changing it to something like
I hope there is a crack,
In your heart's wall
Hoping I can get through the lining
And let my love reach out to you
Just a thought. Hey, Pat! Thanks for your cooments and sugs! Sorry the first two lines are confusing to you but that's the purpose -- to get people thinking. 
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