Originally Posted by Caroline
Crack kills!

I'm gonna come back tomorrow and see what I think. But honestly, crack kills!

Hey, Caroline! I'm aware that crack kills and am in no way suggesting otherwise. The purpose of the first line is to pique listeners interest -- to draw them in, get them thinking. I'd also like to point out here (and not just to you), that the structure of the lyrical lines support the melody perfectly. Thanks for the visit. Hope you have a wonderful day! smile


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