HiYa Vic & Danny!

This IS one damn Beautiful, Powerful Song Ya have here!

I've got one line of it I'd Sug messin'-with; here's why:

Ya mention Singer's "Less than Zero" 'cuz he's Lost Her.

So..Last CH line should indicate "..'TILL IT LEADS ME BACK to you".

(Or, just add the word "BACK" to what's there: "..all the way BACK to you".)

That's all I got to offer. You got Yas a Winner here, IMHO.
KOS, & Good Luck with a Fine One, Gents!!!

Best Wishes & Big /Guys-Hugs,
Stan