Very nice feel and match of music and lyric, Vic. Well done. You've really captured the mood of the song.

Few points. I loved the opening riff. If there's tremolo on it I'd make it even more pronounced. You did the opening riff 2 different ways. I like (and would stick to one regardless) the 2nd time around in the beginning. You stayed on the low notes more and that gave the riff more of a defined feel rather than a loose feel. I would have also liked to hear those low notes repeated after lines 2/4 in the verses as there's a lot of space there and something more unified would sit better, in my ears anyway.

I thought it got a little busy with solo notes near the end of the verses...would rather have heard single strum chord accents maybe w/tremolo.

Chorus lifted like it should...really minor nits from a guitar player--overall real nice work.

Zeek