Hey Michael,
Tweaks below, keep or sweep smile

I done watered down my beer
With lonesome-for-you tears
It's way too salty now to drink

My mind's begun to stain
With restlessness and pain
It's way too racked out now to think

So what have i become,i aint havin' any fun
With this heartache,built for one
Clouds have blocked the sun ,i'm comin' all undone
With this heartache,built for one

I see how hard you worked
To unload a lot of hurt
You built a real fine pile of misery

Now I'm anything but fine
And I'm only killing time
In this house of pain you built for me


I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase. - Harlan Howard

Co-writing = Compromise!