The video is very good, Barry. I didn't realize most of this post was 3 years old! :-) Anyway, if you're going to go commercial with this song, I would follow some of Stan's suggestions or change the title to "Home To My Family". I would like having the 1st chorus be about his earthly family, then return again in the 2nd about his heavenly family (maybe members who have moved on there by name). But I think you have a little gem here, and with a little work it could be great! Not bad as it is, but I think it could be even better.


Betty J. Holt