DOUG!!

There you are!! I am so happy to see you, I was hoping all was well your way!!

This is a riot!! Love the first verse and well sung by you!!

I wonder if the line "we planned it that way" couldn't be made more interesting? Just thought that each time it came around.

The line, "they watch him over my shoulder" is a mouthful and seems rushed.

Other than that, I really enjoyed this and I am so very happy to know you are back!!

Tammy


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