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by Gary E. Andrews - 09/16/26 01:51 AM
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Biding My Time
© Annie
1.)I know I’m a dreamer
and dreams often can come true
But never a schemer (....cuz my grass is greener
while dreaming pretty dreams of you
I’ve been Biding My Time
until you tell him you’re through
You know in your mind
He’s not right for you.
CH
Been having pretty dreams of you
Morning noon and nighttime too
I know you know you`re mine
cause I’ve let love`s light shine.
I’m Biding My Time
2.)
I dream of a love.
Like an opening door
Showing slow glimpses
Of the wonders in store
I know about heartache.
It cuts to the core
I know about pain
and don’t want anymore.
CH
Been having pretty dreams of you
Morning noon and nighttime too
You’ve said it’s through
Dreams can come true
I’ll be seeing you soon
I’m through
Biding My Time
Tag;
I’ll be seeing you soon
I’m through
Biding My Time
Last edited by Annie Tennisco; 10/03/14 02:32 AM.
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It looks well, meter wise, Annie.
Vic
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Hi Annie
On word, wonderful
Really enjoyed reading, could hear a melody in my head.
Have read a few of yours, although I haven't commented.
You definitely have a talent so keep on.
Roger
I'm a lyricist with original lyrics available for all recording purposes, open to collaboration so if interested please see my website. http://www.penkslyrics.com
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i don't know why but i keep hearing Motley Crue's "Home Sweet Home" melody in my head reading this cool lyric.Nice job Annie.Mike
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