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JPF is Back
by John Lawrence Schick - 07/30/26 06:35 PM
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néomí
by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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Joined: Aug 2021
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Hi,
I mostly write Christian songs and I'm looking for feedback on this lyric. I'm also looking for a co-writer that can put music to this. I'm willing to evenly split songwriter royalties and credit if anything happens with the song in exchange for the demo. All I ask for is either a piano/vocal or acoustic guitar/vocal with 2-3 part harmonies in the chorus. You can email me darintechdude2@gmail.com if interested and mention you are a JPF member. Thanks for your time.
"The Cross Tells My Story"
(v1)
I thought I wasn’t worth Your love to be redeemed
That’s when You changed my heart to give me victory
The shame of my brokenness pointed me straight to You
The wounds of my past are a story You will use
(Chorus)
The cross tells my story
Of how You forgave me and set me free
Now that I tasted Your grace, I’ve never been the same
Satan lost the keys to my heart at Calvary
My shackles fell when I called out Your name
All that’s left to do is give You the glory
I'm blessed that the cross tells my story
(V2)
I can’t praise You enough for all You’ve done for me
I’m thankful for the price You paid there at Calvary
When Satan whispers in my ear I’m a slave to sin
That’s when Your mercy reminds me where I’ve been
(Repeat Chorus)
(Bridge)
You still love me despite the mistakes I’ve made
Your arms are wide open, saying it’s not too late
(Repeat Chorus)
Last edited by dtrainddog; 05/09/23 08:36 PM.
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I'd take Satan out of verse 2 its in chorus
When sin whispers I'm a slave again
The demons scream boy its time to sin......... alteration
Last edited by bennash; 07/02/23 11:28 AM.
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