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IRAN
by Fdemetrio - 04/15/26 12:27 PM
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by Fdemetrio - 04/14/26 06:57 AM
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Hi Raymond, I listened. It has a classic soul vibe to it, sort of like James Ingram maybe. I like some of the chords you're using, some nice flavors in there. And I like you're chorus. Might be some rough patches in the verse and in the bridge. Glad its doing well in that chart, I think the vocal is not sitting in the mix right. Theres no effect on it, correct? might need some reverb so it blends in with the music better, and maybe some pitch correction. But the base of it is good, share your songs in the mp3 section, up here all youll find is network time killers......
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Hi, Fdemetrio.
Thank you very much for the tips. Sorry, I've taken this long to get back to you...:-) Yes, "Nowhere..." is a James Ingram-inspired song. I'll share your tips with my producer, and whoever (a pro artist) decides to pick it up, record, and release it...:-)
Raymond
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