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by Fdemetrio - 04/09/26 09:45 PM
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Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele
Soundclick:
https://soundclick.com/song/15227691 Soundcloud:
https://soundcloud.com/guyet-951277639/my-little-sunshine-uke Youtube:
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MY LITTLE SUNSHINE ______________________________________________________ © Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2025. All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier. Intro: 4 bars (Key of C) I like talking with you l like walking with you I like to get close to you Early in the morning Later in the evening All I want is being with youYou're my little sunshine You're my fantasy You're my little sunshine My little sunshine .... .... .... When we dance together I'd do it forever I just long to sway with you Any move of salsa Any move of samba I'm always ready for youYou're my little sunshine You're my fantasy You're my little sunshine My little sunshine Interlude: 8 bars You know how to please me You know how to tease me I can't get enough of you Early in the morning Later in the evening All I want is being with youYou're my little sunshine You're my fantasy You're my little sunshine My little sunshine You're my little sunshine You're my fantasy You're my little sunshine My little sunshine My little sunshine My little sunshine Guy E. Trépanier #672 Melody and lyrics: 2025-12.
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Nice little love song. I like it. I think the last line of the chorus can be optimized. Instead of repeating "my little sunshine" I would have said something like "You mean the world to me". Just a thought. Great job!
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I could change the 3rd line of the chorus for With you I'm so happy or You're the right one for me
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I could change the 3rd line of the chorus for With you I'm so happy or You're the right one for me
I don't know. That might break the rhyme scheme.
My idea was:
You're my little sunshine
You're my fantasy
You're my little sunshine
You mean the world to me or something else that rhymes with "fantasy"
Alternatives:
You're where I want to be
You're my melody
You're my gravity
You're my harmony
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