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Started resisting this, not sure i wanna invest 8 hours on this, just a blues tune

Worth workin on?

https://www.udio.com/songs/dqNekikG54DNXgVhSENh79

Are you married ? You can't write that unless you're married . You can't hit them , Some kinda rule . So you're defenseless . You have no choice but to run and shiver

No, but have paid the bills and the dues just the same.

It gets worse. He finds a mistress, and she catches him, now he's worried she's gonna cut off his schlong

Posted my own version of it long time ago here, was received well

You've avoided marriage your whole life ? You're my new hero . So what is it a trip to the cat house on a make believe honeymoon for a hour ? I'm not sure who scares me worse the IRS or my wife .

Lol. Mom wanted me to marry at least two of them, she's gone now bless her heart..

Ive been close razor close lol

My wife never talks to me anyway , So it's like being single . Friends with benefits or some bullshit like that. Mistress ? Who can afford them in this economy ? Burner phones , Motel 6 charges ? To much work . I want you to leave your wife and marry me . Marry you why do you think I'm with you ? I never liked marriage in the first place. I don't know how the Mormons did it and 15 wives . Can you imagine pms hitting all at once ?

So peaceful without the typical trouble makers.

Only time im in a fight is when im attacked.

In the end, its about music here

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Your capacity for denial is limitless.


I told you months ago...

You are the death knell here.


Look around. What more proof do you need?
You are now celebrating the emptiness that you created, as if its a win.

Denial.

I KNEW you were lurking and couldn't resist.

Sooo predictable

Marty, the bottom line is when you're NOT here, the site is about songs and music.

The minute you return, there's bickering. Whining, its so obvious.

Start contributing here.

There are hundreds of people here, bens song has 120 views two replies.

I think most read the lyric and run away.

But at least yiu know people are seeing it.

Your lurking, Rob is lurking, guy is lurking, north is lurking, Travis is lurking, Mike is lurking, , .

Midnite bob is lurking, John is lurking, , anybody who seemingly comes out of nowhere, has been lurking the whole time

They shoukd be made to sign in to read content

Seeing what?

Some unintelligible drivel that you have titled "Rob"....which is actually just a vague personal attack...with content exclusively descriptive of dysfunctionality (sp) that only goes on here.

Like me they likely look at the title, may open the post, read or hear a couple of lines, and see that it is just boring and un-relatable bit of idiocy.

Congratulations Dom. You have made this website about you.
The problem is...you aren't much.

Rob at least writes songs, and produces them.

He has a purpose here, yeah, he attacks me for no reason, but I'd have to say overall, he's much more valuable here, than you.

You just come here with the same non sense, errr...making site about you....

, yeah this coming from the clown who so hated Ai, that he insisted it belongs in the minors section of the forum, so that REAL writers could not be overlooked.

Flash forward few weeks, he completely stopped producing those songs, in favor of Ai.

You made a massive stink out if it.

You contribute to the bullshit here, until you decide to be a revolutionary, and fight for truth, justice and the American way.

Its one fight after another, you bring the site down to its lowest denominator, and why? Thats not clear.

You'd think such a zealot would have something to share, since he spends 24 hours a day here whining about what the site needs.

But no, he's got nothing.

Your just not happy, unless you are complaining.

You continue to troll me and my great songs.

You justt pout and wheeze, and mumble and take up space here. Ruining song threads, and any thread.

And it doesn't bother you.

If this site was completely yours, you'd have nothing to do here

Now , now children

And its obvious, Tony is not here, I had nothing to do with that, you probably did.

Yes it's much more focused now, but when your away, there's no politics, there's, suddenly a sense of what the site should be, even with minimal participation.

But seriously, you've been putting up this same act for not days, not weeks, nor months, not years, for a decade....

And you've posted maybe ten rongs in ten years, with the same ones recurring over and over again.

These are your golden years, you seem to want to spend them here, whining.

To each their own

So Dom, any problems here have nothing to do with you?

And two people that I worked up songs with who quit because of you...actually had nothing to do with you.

Let's put that to a test.
It's June 27. I won't post again until July 5...if you don't bring my name up or post some bit of garbage that I decide requires redress.

Keep me out of it and I'm gone until, at least, the 5th.

That gives you over a month to establish this site as JustPlainDom with no opposition from me.

Let's see what you can do with it.

On July 5th, if it is a productive and cordial forum, I'll assume that you aren't the sites "death knell," and that my presence is the undesired disruption... and will stay gone.

You are...one of the children.
Evidenced by this post.

Im not feeding you any more

I'm good with that.

See you on the 5th of July...or maybe not.

theres only 3 children here

Love the hook Dom but in execution you do betray the fact you are not married

IMO your examples do a disservice to that excellent hook...the very first reaction by Elvis showed you that

Maybe rewrite on the basis of dumb but intimate things...you ate the cake she baked for her mom....one suggestion

Anyway, stellar hook...

Not sure what means John, i cant write this title if im not married?

Is David Bowie an astronaut?

Added second verse, its something different if not a blues song.

I got the idea from the idea that some of the most powerful and dangerous people in the world are afraid of their wives. Find it funny in a way, cartel leaders, mafia, bikers...dont wanna mess with their wife...cause of the collateral damage they can inflict.

https://www.udio.com/songs/cvD4XijAP6D7tLqkYv2Aav
Well, I,'m king of the bar room
I pack a mean punch
Once knocked a man unconscious
Cause I had a wrong hunch
Never gave in an inch to fear
Not one time in my life
But, i'm afraid of my wife
I'm afraid of my wife

Woman's got a vendetta
she wants to make me pay
Found me a little mistress
Just got caught the other day
Now, she's gonna take all my money
And some would call it right
Well, I've battled with the Bikers
Boots with metal spikes
But i'm afraid of my wife
I'm afraid of my wife

Marriage is war and you lose every time . You need more on the little women , why we call they little , no idea

lol. i guess they call her little cause they dont think its a BIG deal. Just a part timer.

Im not sure i need anything else about the mistress, its the wife is afraid of.

Gonna add this verse...

Now, hell knowith no fury
like a woman scorn
she's gonna set me up
for somethin funky after dawn
Rest assured, i'll be watchin my P's and Q's tonight
Just like Lorena Bobbit gone Ginzo with her knife
i'm afraid of my wife
I'm afraid of my wife

I'm still in shock you avoided marriage your whole life . I'm a New York City revolving door of wives . I turned into a total assholee like George Carlin , I can barely stand myself. Wives always get younger when you're old , when you reach 60 you start going backwards . So you're 16 again and so are wives. I should have watched more Mister Rogers . I don't think he had that problem . What you girls call your self now Gen Z or under age ?, I get confused. I suggest a name tag San Quentin . So old men know .

Alot of things fell out of place....ohhh new title, but alot of things fell out of place, there were selfish years, there was a ton of second guessing, and just being caught up in bookies, and sports, , alot of girls didnt know i played music at all. Were many years I didn't pick up a guitar, kinda in that now.

But when I hit 35, it seemed most girls had baggage. I wasn't into that. 30 minute relationships are fun too

Im more open to marriage now, id like to, well see

Your old now , You go back to being a kid at that age . So mentally you're 16 again . So marry one about 22 , you'll be on the same level . But nikes , there quick. What was that flash going by ? that was my wife . oh the 37 year age difference , I'm bored on the joke. Did you marry your grand daughter ? Well close . Does she have a father complex ? Nope grandfather complex . Thats a new one. Just jokes , We get along fine .

I think all you men on here are Mister rogers , I'm not , I wish

Dom, you can definitely write something you have no experience with... LOL I do that a lot

But then I do a lot of research into the topic...nail down vernaculars to make things sound more real etc.

What you show in you writing is that you do not have the nuanced understanding of your relationship.

THAT comes with experience....but keep trying....the hook is worth it

Maybe think sitcom plots to get ideas

Maybe a visual here...you took a sledgehammer and prybar to the marble instead of a chisel and mallet.

I'd agree with that, if it was a warm and fuzzy song about playfully being afraid of your wife. I totally get it, I grew up with married parents, my brother is married, I myself lived for years at a time with partner.

But this is NOT that song, its different.

You have your own idea what the song should be.

Nuanced understanding of married life does not apply here.

All my songs involve deep understanding of the character in the song.

I feel like the worse coach on that planet and a team that never listens/ I'm surrounded by stupidity . Nobody give a fucke on a forum

Create FB and Youtube page as artist and promote............... Whats it take an act of that fairy tale in the sky to get it done ?

When the women comment . Give some bullshit , I feel you cause . Don't be yourself the'll hate you. Say you deserve to be on a pedestal. Now that is some good bullshit

That is the goal, just gotta figure out what wre promoting.

On a side note would you agree people should have to log in here to read content?

Some might say, what difference does it make?

Well, when somebody is logged in their user name shows as online.

I have a sneaking suspicion there would be hundred or so names we recognize.

They might stop lurking, or they night be embarrassed to start participating.

We could mock them as we see their name.

I think they are so addicted to this site, they wouldn't be able to stop.

But I guess from site ownership, they bring hits to the site, and rankings dont tank

Your songs stupid Dom the artist, your like the men that work for me , never listen to shite. morons. Cry babies , Don't act like that when you switch gears to music . Turn into Mister Rogers

yes but i have hundreds of songs. my latest post has 76 views zero replies. so its not even viewed cause of traffic, its viewed by default.

its the most fuckin bizarre thing ive ever seen, is it real people viewing?

maybe they could offer some insight as to a consensus of whats songs to promote

Bull shite , Promote 10 as Dom Use some AI pic of you. I look like a runaway model , some bs like that. I was the star football captain and married the home coming queen. These major women artists hate sports but marry football stars. Taylor swift would not date a plumber , So I guess the Alapa Male works

i have to re record and change most of these songs, ten would be tough.

I think i could release maybe 5 different albums, for lack of a better word, but 5 concepts where 5 songs or so all fit that subject.

but i have to redo everything and maybe ditch ais version all together. I see it as a sketch

ok 5 lazy ass. Well thats enough , time for law and order reruns and Jack McCoy/ pussy , See ya. Ya know I just treated my wife like my dog , Your such a good girl , I'm losing it

I just came across this, John tried to explain to me, that I didn't research, or have nuanced understanding, like somebody like his wordly self does...lollllll

This is exactly why this song was written. Gotta add last verse then another gem done.

All my songs speak to somebody, and I dont need to research either

But John i tell ya, he's a riot

https://www.udio.com/songs/kSwtyrJAELBC3iB8x4z5cK

Dangerous men are often terrified of their wives because these women hold something more valuable to them than their freedom: the power to disrupt their domestic peace and expose their lives.

The dynamic stems from a few specific realities:Possession of Vital Secrets: Wives and long-term partners know where the bodies are buried—both literally and financially. If a wife turns on her husband, she can dismantle his entire operation.
The "Easy Life" Mandate: Mob bosses and bikers live incredibly high-stress, violent lives outside the home. They often view the home as a sanctuary.
Their biggest fear is the daily emotional fallout, nagging, and constant drama of an angry partner, which drains them of the energy needed for their dangerous external lives.

Trauma Bonds and Dependency: Despite their tough facades, many of these men are deeply emotionally dependent on their wives to anchor them. Losing that emotional stability is a threat they aren't equipped to handle.Fear of the Unknown:

Joker-style chaos doesn't care about consequences, but organized criminals have strict, unspoken codes. An enraged partner is wildly unpredictable and can bring ruin without playing by traditional criminal rules.

Bullshit men are not afraid of their wives . I was joking ya . Yup you've never been married , Thats obvious with all that bullshit . There's only 2 scenarios here, either you've been jerking off for 60 years, or in cat houses . You'll never know the horror, I mean intimacy of marriage . Death row inmates , I mean partners . Yes I'm single . You mean your jerking off ? Why yes , but your a ashholee. Well don't say , lying is better .Are you looking for a long time relationship ? Well so am I , Lets walk on the beach . Try that. You see women laugh at us cavemen , thats how it works in marriage . We beat out chest . they know the breaking point in a normal marriage . Men are pawns. You see women dealt with the devil long time ago . Were nothing to them . Well time to go . let me know if you need more advice .

The facts are in. Real men are afraid of their wives, regardless that's the song

I haven't been alive 6o years, and I sure as hell haven't been jacking off that whole time lol.maybe half the time. Lollllll

Ive done live in girlfriend's for years at a time.

Its kinda the same, just not as final

ok only half the time, if you buy a guitar and your wife finds out, then your afraid of her. Then bribery is used . Do you take this women thru extortion ? Yes I do . Where's the honey moon ? At Guitar center .

Yeah, the takeover of AI slop on Facebook and artificial artists is becoming hard to ignore. Feeds are getting flooded because AI content is cheap, fast, and the algorithms reward volume and engagement more than effort. A lot of creators are saying the same thing: it feels like quantity beat craftsmanship.
For musicians and songwriters, the frustration is bigger because fake artists, AI music channels, and mass-produced content can drown out people actually putting years into writing and recording. Even music platforms are starting to react because listener trust is becoming a problem.
At the same time, there’s also backlash growing. Audiences are starting to want more raw, human content, behind-the-scenes clips, imperfections, live takes, and proof there’s a real person behind the music. Authenticity is becoming part of the product again.
For somebody like you—recording with Nashville musicians, writing your own songs, showing the flaws and the stories—that actually becomes an advantage. A guy singing songs from a small town and posting real process videos stands out more when everyone else looks computer-generated.
If you want a FB post out of this feeling, something like:
AI slop is taking over Facebook. Fake artists, fake faces, fake stories. Meanwhile some of us are still writing songs at 2 AM, driving 7 hours for work, paying Nashville musicians, and singing with all the cracks and flaws humans come with. Maybe being real becomes outlaw again.

I know the fake stories are out of control. . Thankfully most people know and question it.

But in a world where fake news is a rallying call this makes it worse

Fake artists, its bullshit , its AI songs and fake pics and stories

But most people laugh and say if only that was a real story.

I saw a video of Springsteen buying a house for a poor family. Actually had an Ai video of him telling them he bought it and them crying.

Complete fake

That was not the point really, FB is run over with AI songs and fake artists , Why real ones like me struggle .

Well, I dont think there was Ever a time it was easy to be heard or recognized. And there's still thousands of indies who struggle..

Its just a flawed business model. The supply dwarfs the demand, no business works like that.

If you look at it as a business you've failed already.

If you look at it as your doing something that comes from the heart, and do it right, you've won.

I'd argue that you have it better today. There are ways to place music directly to somebody's ear.

You take for granted your place on iTunes or Spotify, or yourube, soundcloud, or even here.

You couldn't get heard anywhere in 1990.

Had to play clubs, still probably the best way.

I think all ai teaches us, is that no matter whst we do it doesnt go very far, even with great arrangements and production.

Its a jelly bean in an aquarium shot.

I think you gotta play live especially now where everybody wants to be a star pressing buttons

There's 5 indies in NYC, who in my estimation master songwriters.

James Maddock will forever play small venues.

I dont know maybe he makes 1000 a gig maybe 2000, but this is a guy known for being a songeriters songwriter.

Praised by top artists in the world.
Great voice too

Hes just not one of the lucky marketable ones.

Look at his touring schedule.

He definitely makes a living, but he should be a big star.

https://jamesmaddock.net/tour