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JPF is Back
by John Lawrence Schick - 07/31/26 11:55 AM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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http://kendamkier.com/I%20Had%20Enough.mp3 It's been a long time since I recorded a song and uploaded it to JPF. This one troubled my mind for some time and I guess I can't bring it out the way it goes in my mind, but better make a statement and put it out so I can go on with other projects. I've in doubt if there are elements from an old hit song? If you recognize something here that is "stolen" from an already published song, please let me know! Any kind of cretique will be welcomed. Many greatings to all my JPF-friends from your viking in Denmark. ....................................... I HAD ENOUGH I could wake you up and say 'm still here babe its okay I could fake a smile for a while But that's not my style I have heard you never cared Now I'm lonely now I'm scared Like a bird with a broken wing I learned to sing about the ancient thing called Love, I had enough It's too tough to even talk about Love, I had enough Now I'm shouting all my pain out loud About Love, I had enough of love, I had enough You're like day when I'm like night I'm like grey when you're like bright There’s no way I can win back your love I'm told from above You're eternal to me a universe of love You’ll always be above endlesly eternel to me But I had enough It's too tough to even talk about Love, I had enough Now I'm shouting all my pain out loud About Love, I had enough of love I had enough
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Hi Ken, Beautifully sad, & very nice performance. I did not recognize anything stolen :-) Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hey Ken, Good job on setting a mood here! I really like the lyric and the guitar behind it. I couldnt find anything that I thought was to much like something else. If I had to find something to critique I would say that it felt like the vocal should have been up higher in the scale. Perhaps even a female vocalist. Thats just my opinion, and Im guessing you played and recorded this yourself so you sang it in your range. Good Job!
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You have a really soothing and clear voice. The lyric is pretty as is the guitar playing...very nice job!!!
Kimberly
*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!** BMI Member All Rights Reserved http://www.littleikepublishing.com Email for Song Business Only littleikeproductions@hotmail.com
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I am glad you came back to post this song, just so I could hear that mellow guitar and voice.
I could possibly use your voice in some of my songs, if you are ever interested in such a thing. It would have been perfect for my "Good Morning World".
By the way, I can understand the "I had enough" sentiment.
Doug
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Man, talk about giving up on love. By the time the song was over I felt really bad for you. The song embodies that whole "Screw it! I'm through with this crap!" attitude. I would love to hear you sing a Leonard Cohen song.
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Nice work. What gives the song its bite for me is the last line of the chorus:
"About Love, I had enough of love, I had enough" The way you change up the music/chord progression for this last line somberly drives home the point.
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Very beautiful song Ken. I don't hear anything that seems like another song that I'm familiar with. Anyway, there are only so many chord progressions and notes to work with.
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I'm the only person here who is not unique.
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Hey Ken great job! This could be crash test dummies. Always liked the deep full vocals like that! Very straight forward lyricly. I thought this was good all the way around.
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My lawyers will be contacting you in the morning. I just want to pretend I'm good enough for you to "steal" something from me.
Seriously, this is all unique to me and a great sounding song. Love your vocals and the simple backing.
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Hi Ken
I love what you do : ) - I'm a fan ~ jm
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