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{Woke Up at 5AM, gettin' ready to head off to Lakeland & Finally take the FLA mandatory 2-Day Cycle School.. But, here came a Lyric while Breakfasting...& Here We Gooo...before Here We Go!}

She's Certainly Different From-The-Rest
Her Clothes are Tighter (If You've Noticed?)
There's a Fire-of-Passion in Her Breasts
& It-Shows-NICELY That Way She's Dressed

Yeah, She's So Mighty-Fine-to-Watch
With An-Extra-Wiggle in The Way-She-Walks
& Beautifully-EARTHY The Way-She-Talks
Next Thing Ya Know, She's Grabbin' Your Crotch....
{ALT Line: She Don't wear No Dress or Sit With-Legs-Crossed}

'Cuz...

(CHORUS)
Sweet-Little-Girls are a Dime-a-Dozen
But a SENSUAL GIRL'S Gonna Give You GOOD LOVIN'
(a SENSUAL GIRL...)

She Don't Need (Whole) Lotta Makeup..On Her Face
'Cuz She's REAL-Womanly in Every Place
Million-Dollar Bootie, & (a) MATCHIN' Waist
Her 2 Beacons-in-The-Night Make MY Heart Race

(REPEAT CHORUS)

(BRIDGE)
During My Lifetime I've Tried a Whole-Lotta Lovers
Only a SENSUAL GIRL's Got ALL The BASES-COVERED...

Now, Tongues-Will-Click & Rumors'll-Spread
From The Day You Find Her, 'Til The Day-You're-Dead
She Defies Convention, But You're-Ahead
Every Evening As..She Makes-You-Sweat...

'Cuz...

(2X CHORUS)
Sweet Li' Girls are A Dime-A-Dozen
But a SENSUAL GIRL
Is WHERE There's Lovin'
(A SENSUAL GIRL)

OOO...Sweet-Li'l-Girls Run A Dime-A-Dozen
But a SENSUAL GIRL's Got
ALL The RIGHT-STUFFIN;
(a SENSUAL GIRL...)

(TAG)
A SENSUAL GIRL...
(REPEAT & FADED-OUT)

(C) 20l2 by Stan Good, BMI
All Rights Reserved.

Hey Stan
A nice fun lyric,and I do think that sensuality is much better than overt sexuality.

Joe

STAN THE MAN--

I guess you'll go back for a second look--CAN'T BLAME YOU!


MAYBE:

Yeah, She's So Mighty-Fine-to-Watch
With An-Extra-Wiggle in The Way-She-Walks
REAL SLOW & SEXY- The Way-She-Talks
Next Thing Ya Know, She's LOOKIN' DOWN LOW….


WRITE ON BRO'--

Mackie

G'Mornin' Bro UK, & Thanks for Your Kind Visit, Buddy!

Think this'n's the first I've put the word "Bootie" in...but not totally-sure. And..it was Great Fun, too! ;-)>

Dunno about liking my Women on The Trashy-Side...but "Earthy", now That's More-Like-It...heh-heh! Add-in "Intelligent".."Sarcastic".."Witty"..and "Forgiving"...& Lordy, What a Turn-On... ;-)>

Thanks for Your Kind Visit, Amigo... Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan

G'Mornin' T-Bro!

Yeah, I DO needa think a Bit More on that Line there, don't I....heh-heh---

Your Sugs are Good'n's...I'll Grantya. I'm too tired-out right now to make a decision...but...I'll be baack... (REAL tired from Another Day of Cycle School...Still got a buncha Homework to do before I can doze-off tonight...)

Thanks Very Much for Your Kind Visit & fine Sugs...
Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan

hey hey hey,sounds like a dream come true!A nice write other-cycle-guy!

HiDee CycleGuy!!!

Thanks for Your Kind Visit & Backpat...&..Hey, I JUST Passed the 2-Day-Course, get the Official OK on my DL...& it's Champagne Time around here...WHEEEEE!!!!

Gotta give the Coaches BIG Credit...I'm LOTS Safer today than I was 2 Days Ago.... ;-)>

Best Wishes, Big Guy-Hug, and a Real-Happy High-Five,
Stan

I'm glad to hear that Stan,congrats to ya!Cruisin' the coast should be a blast!

Hey Stan,
WOW - you like writing these sensual songs, huh! LOL

The all-important first line must grab...I don't think...

"She's Certainly Different From-The-Rest"

...is strong enough to hold attention, but the following 2 lines certainly do! But the fourth line...

"& It-Shows-NICELY That Way She's Dressed"

...is weak, IMO

Then in the second verse, the first line...

"Yeah, She's So Mighty-Fine-to-Watch"

... is weak, by itself, might want to start that verse with the second line:

With An-Extra-Wiggle in The Way-She-Walks

The second line of verse 3...

'Cuz She's REAL-Womanly in Every Place

...is too general...needs a more visual image, IMO

Anyhoo, these are my tweaks, keep or sweep!

can you get her number for me stan??? :))) scotty

Thankee Bro C-G... I get the LAST of the paperwork..& the $35 fee..behind me this Afternoon when I LEGALLY can ride this Bike for the first time in Half a Year--

Jumpin' that 2-by-4 yesterday was NOTHIN' like all the Red Tape this Cycle's put me through...(State Sheriff Customer of mine was sellin' it for his Son...who'd had a lien on it...DID pay it off..lean co. sent me Satisfaction-Of Docs, but neglected to send me a valid TITLE....) Which...took near-forever..'til I threatened to Sue 'Em ALL...& then it ended up with me driving North of Town a wee-bit to another county to wrap up the Title Transfer.

But..Worth it All..I feel. Weather Here's Gorgeous...& I'll pack some Clock Tools in a Backpack..& Roar outta here on Housecalls..& Really Enjoy my Travels here...really-soon!

And no longer have to EVER fear "$4-a-Gallon Gasoline" again--

Thanks Again, C-G...Best Wishes/BGH..& a High-Five again,
Stan

HiDee Meister, & Big THANKS for All The Time You put into Improving Mah Babies!!!

I honestly think my Line One WAS a Pretty-Good "Grabber/Teaser"...because Most Ears Perk-Up hearing "She's DIFFERENT" in-conversation.

WHY is she Different? Waal..Ya gotta Listen-to-The-SONG to Find Out...heh...& the next 2 Lines did their jobs.

I guess both instances, I pen-'em like Hamburgers...Bitta White Bread at beginning-&-end, with the Serious Meat in the-Middle.

The "Womanly in Every Place" Line...Waal..Some Things are More-FUN left up to the Listener's Imagination....methinks....

I DO apologize to all the Sweet Li'l Gals out there...If I'd ever had a Daughter, Yeah...I'd WANT her to be Sweet. (& Yeah, I'd for-sure Warn Her about Guys-Like-Me....) ;-)>

Many Thanks for Peekin'-In and Sugging-Away, Kind Buddy...&..We've got Another Interested Party looking into buyin' our Pink Place this week...so...those Many Steak Dinners I've Owed Ya may soon be shaping up at a NashCity Restaurant of Your Choice... (Here's a-Hopin' it's Soon!)

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan

What can I say, Brother Scotty..."She" is a Composite...so I'd have to feed ya an Entire Phonebook...heh-heh!

& Anyways, You know it's "The Thrill of The Hunt"...& I'd sure hate to spoil it for ya... ;-)>

Thanks for Your Kind Visit & Request..& Happy Huntin'!

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan

Stan,
I like sexy songs, and this is one. Makes me want to head downtown tonight and take my chances.
Jim Colyer

HiYa Brother Jim!

Yeah, Me Too....heh-heh!

Went to the Drivers License place today..for my MC Licence (which I Thought was just a sticker to put on my DL...) and Lo & Behold, I AGAIN gotta Return (5 mile trek) with my Passport, W-2 Form, Car Registration/Water-Bill/& whatever ELSE convinces the Idjuts I Am
Not a Terrorist. (Law was Changed a bit since I got my DL last trip down there/"It's Not a Gold-Star ID"...La Dee Dah...)

DID get a small Round of Applause from the other Victims seated in the Waiting Room...heh...but, yep, gotta make 'Nuther Trip before I can FINALLY put the Cycle on the Road & not have to worry 'bout a Ticket & a Tow... (WILL have to get some $30-40 Sunglasses...if I ride w/No Helmet...CAN get ticketed if they're not Shatterproof Lenses.) Just learned THAT yesterday at the $l50 School I HAD to attend, before I could get Properly-Insulted at the License Bureau today.

Looks to me like The Terrorists WON...(I'd like to shoot me a few Civil Servants...heh-heh.)

Thanks for Your Kind Visit, Amigo...& Good Luck findin' Someone Fun Tonight...(At least the Gov't hasn't found TOO many ways to Tax That--or Need a Permit!)

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan