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To write, or not to write
That is the question

I changed well known phrase...and really, that was a question for me...
And now this is not question, but process, that I'm involved in...

So, what happened, that never before wrote even couple of words, once decided to write a script?

Well, shorter: several years ago one man told me a story where
he took a part, and that was an auction with two gangs competing
there to buy some piece of a state land, and it wasn't scary as
most criminals, but at the contrary, it was so funny, that I laughed of it as never before...
And after years had passed I've got a proposal from a group
of private investors to submit a project related with entertainment...I recollected that funny story and asked poster
if they accept screenplays...and they confirmed it, so,
now I had a meeting with a previous story teller to refresh
those events...and begun to write, and studying screenwriting
and everything related with it, both creative and business sides...
Now I have a script's title FUNKY AUCTION
and a logline with variants, so, if some are interested I could place here some scene (each no more than a page) for judgment of my writing, ok?

OK !

cheers, niteshift

Well, so far this is my photo entitled "Slim and a knight" I made specially for one scene with gangsters:

[img]http://www.soundclick.com/mysoundclick/default.cfm?content=photos&id=716577[/img]

Later I'll post this scene (after will get it formated)

Hi Alek,

Here's a good place for screenwriting tips. There's even one forum for 3-5 page reviews.

http://donedealpro.com/default.aspx

Good luck, and congratulations on the contact!

Midnite

Bob thanks, will see it, although, I already have some others too,
and I take a part in discussions there, even posted my logline
for review and got very useful advices from experienced guys.