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Gone
by Michael W. Brown - 09/30/26 07:17 PM
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Mara Cole
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/30/26 01:32 PM
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As usual, you did your typical bang up job, Dave. I like the line in the last verse...
And as long as the lights are on
In his heart you'll be home
My only nit is that the guitar seems a bit muddy with perhaps too much in the effects department. The chorus sounds great but too much reverb or something? Might just be my listening system right now. Without going into detail, I'm just listening in mono for the moment as I've got my system temporarily plugged in that way. Too bad you don't play bass. Some bass, strings and light percussion would really make this soar. I mean it's good as is but the possibilities are there for future reference. Nice job once again.
Stevie
I'm the only person here who is not unique.
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