Country lyric. As always, I have the music but I want to focus on improving the lyrics right now. Let me know what you think smile

Achin’ Like That

Crawling along a hot evening road
I’m whistlin’ Dixie, you’re blowing smoke
This old car is breaking its bones
And me, I’m achin’ like that

We get lost in an old ghost town
Government made the last couple move out
I heard they watched as the house came down
And me, I’m achin’ like that

You tell me stories of you as a young’un
Cowboys and Indians out back with your cousins
Oh, how it hurt when they shot you down
And me, I’m achin’ like that
And me, I’m achin’ like that

There’s a girl in town with beautiful eyes
Breaks your heart with every smile
She’ll never know you have her memorised
But me, well, I’m achin’ like that
I’m achin’ just like that

I swear up to heaven and down to hell
I need you more than I can tell
Don’t leave me achin’ like that
Don’t leave me achin’ like that

You are the light of the world. A city on a hill cannot be hidden.

17 year old country singer/songwriter from the Deep South... of England. I love most everything.

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