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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/26/26 12:29 AM
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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 08/26/26 12:29 AM
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Wendy Woo
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/22/26 12:36 AM
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John Eddy
by Gary E. Andrews - 08/21/26 03:25 PM
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SHINE
by Rob B. - 08/20/26 02:34 PM
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I'm with Kurt and Eddie on this one.. I really dig the vibe and the feel and the metaphoric aspects if it. It leaves a lot to the imagination; until the last part. I'd stick with the metaphoric (and leverage the steam built up by the rest of the lyric) and hint at what they should do if she ever ever looks their way. Cool tune you got here man. Thanks for sharing it.  -S
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