(Editor's Note: Not so sure I totally like this one; not so sure I totally hate it either. Love it or hate it, here she is.)

Thanks for the Rewrite

I wrote a love song for you
With six strings and a pen
For your green eyes and your brown hair
And the way we were back then

Then you went and left
Headed back to Okarche
Nothing but a worn-out Martin
And a voice that's way off key

I'd thank you for the rewrite
But you made my life a wreck
If we ever hit the Billboard, babe
Not sure I'll send a check


I sat down to cut a demo
It all came off the track
Cause words and music stick around
And you're never coming back

The verse became a curse
And the chorus wouldn't sing
I came to the bridge and burned it
Then I broke a guitar string

I'd thank you for the rewrite
But you made my life a wreck
If we ever hit the Billboard, babe
Not sure I'll send a check


When I wrote this love song for you
Six strings and a pen
For your green eyes and your brown hair
And the way we were back then

Last edited by Chris B.; 08/15/13 11:21 PM.

73's & 88's Good Buddy!
Chris Bohlman