Beautiful Floyd.

Nice chord progressions especially. I was thinking how I would love to hear a fairly mild "weeping type" guitar solo," but there are time constraints, so one idea that might work is when you sing the chorus the 2nd time, to hold on to the word (alone) and go "up" melodically--and as you're doing that, an electric guitar will play out the chorus melody, then you sing with the along with the solo on the last chorus line. (This is just an idea, and maybe not a great one, but might be worth experimenting to give a dramatic build toward this song's ending before capitulating.

I really enjoyed this, as usual a fine melody with sweet vocals.

steady-eddie.