Here's the new one…. Would love any critiques or thoughts!

http://youtu.be/6zdu2PZ_Vv0
(this is an updated link with a much better mix….thank you eddie for the honest critique! It's not perfect, but I can sleep a little better now wink

BURNING PASTURES FOR GREENER GRASS
By Aaron Barber
© 2014

VERSE
Snow finally melted away
I’d love to forget this past winter
Just when you think it’s here to stay
It waves a flag in surrender
We watch the embers every spring
Southern fields with built in charm
On the edge of our little patch
The fires roar in the dark

CHORUS
It feels a bit strange
When we leave the past
Celebrate a change
With the toss of a match
We might get a scar
That forever lasts
We were burning pastures for greener grass

VERSE
He ain’t her Romeo
At least that’s what she wrote
In a letter that was charred
In the fireplace of their home
She’d needed to escape
A life that made her choke
Ashes filling up her mirror
On that old tired and worn out road

BRIDGE
Stuck in these chains
But only for a little awhile
Ain’t no use in complainin'