Originally Posted by Dave Whitehead
Tom,

Really nice. Good performance.

Two quick opinions to consider.

1. I think I'd like to hear "in my soul" repeated at the end of each chorus.

2. begin their blow
I think "begin to blow" works a little better.

Again, Nicely crafted.

Dave wink


Thanks for the listen and comments, Dave....."begin their blow" / "begin to blow"....here, I went back and forth, and decided that their added to the sentiment. I was able to sing their more effectively, as well.
As the ink to this is still drying....I will be playing around with the wording in the weeks to come. Thanks!