This comes across as a really passionate song. I like the guitar and soft delivery and how the vocal fluctuates as the story is told. The emotion is all there. I was surprised not to hear "When" as the final word sung, but it's a fine song just as it is.

Enjoyed it!

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist