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What a clever little write. I enjoyed it! At the end of the song, in your outro lines, I kinda wanted hear something like, "Now where's my chardonnay?" You coulda rhymed it back to your "'cause it's not til the end of the day" line, and the chardonnay reference might have tied in nicely with the "wine" reference in your bridge. Just an idea, but this was really good. -TK
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