Hey Tom ... I really appreciate your thoughts on this song and I agree with the Segar sound ... I just didn't know what Segar song it reminded me of.
Originally Posted by Cognac
Hey there Jimmy....I like this very much...however, I think you should play around with the melody a bit more. It really smacks of Segar's, "Turn The Page".
Like what you did with the recording. A very full and rich sound!
Good stuff!
-Tom