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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Hi Beech,
It's a good write with an interesting play on words. I think I'd have to hear it though. I got kind of lost with the 2 parts to the first verse compared to 3 parts to the 2nd verse. Also the syllable count threw me off. I couldn't get a rhythm to it as I read it because of the differences. It might iron itself out though the way you intend it to play out. Hope you are doing well. Best wishes!
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