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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Mar 2002
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by palidin: [B]Sonny, great song here. I only see one very small nit. You use a lot of "near rhymes" nothing wrong with that. But I think it would be even better to tighten up the rhyme scheme. I know thats not always easy to do but any time that you can have a perfect rhyme, thats always better. I'm sure you could say the same of some of my work. Very compelling song Rob Thanks Rob! I dunno, it seems to work real well with my headtune, but what changes would you make to tighten it up? Just curious! Thetuneman ------------------ http://www.soundclick.com/sonnygreen
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