Thank you Aaron for bringing this all to my attention. I agree with you 100%. Made some big changes. Let me know if this is better.

JUST GO
1.
She’s a beautiful whore dressed like a queen
She pulls you in like a pair of skinny jeans.
You won’t find another like her
Satisfies you like I wish I could.

(pre chorus)
She’s your go to, fills you, takes you in, and thrills you
Seducing you any way she can.

(chorus)
She’s a camp high in the hills
Lights his eyes on fire like a carnival thrill
Hunting gear, fishing poles and don’t forget the compound bow
I want to make him happy so I say “just go”
2.
Count the days till you see her again
I can’t complain cause I would never win
She’s your drug, she’s your siren song
Whispering in your ear “darling please come home”

(pre chorus)
She’s your go to, fills you, takes you in, and thrills you
Seducing you any way she can.

(chorus)
She’s a camp high in the hills
Lights his eyes on fire like a carnival thrill
Hunting gear, fishing poles and don’t forget the compound bow
I want to make him happy so I say “just go”

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