Originally Posted by Deej56
Hi, Tom,

First off, I like the sound, I like the lyrics. But the vocal really kills and carries this—really cool sound. An acoustic version this one, but I could hear it work equally as well with a full band behind it. That said, I think I would prefer this one of the two. Really, really great work, IronKnee. Loved it.

Post-script: As I was listening to this and writing the above feedback, Eddie's comments popped up before I posted. I'm going down a slippery hill, but it's the second time tonight I'm going to mildly disagree with Eddie. The third verse works fine for me. If I were to focus on anything, it would be the first two lines of the second verse and how they lead into the third line.

But that's getting way too analytical, IMO. For me, the melody, mood, vocal and overall performance--everything--just works for me here. I really wouldn't change much, if anything at all. Awesome listen!

Regards,

Deej



Thanks, Deej...........glad you like it. The lyric makes sense to me, but I guess I'm a bit close to the write. I thought they were pretty simple and straight forward. One can never tell ;-) Thanks for the comments.
-Tom