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by CTthomas - 09/13/26 07:10 PM
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Dave,
Love when you post a tune . . . I know Ill always hear something fresh and compelling. Not a disappointment here. Is it me or is there a Bowie feel to this one on your vocals, particularly on that pre-chorus (yeah, which also has a Steely Dan vibe to it).
The production hits all the right notes (no pun intended!). The changes throughout worked just fine for me, as does the bridge, moving into that nice guitar solo. I get what Gavin is suggesting regarding the bridge, but I wouldnt change anything.
Love the abrupt finishcool ending.
Great stuff, Dave!
All my best,
Deej
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