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RY X
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Soft Loft
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 11:52 AM
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8Graves
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/20/26 06:05 PM
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Saosin
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/20/26 02:43 PM
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I enjoyed this song and it's abstract melody direction. Very cool lyrics for sure. I think the bridge needs to digress less abstractly since the verses and chorus have that unique mysterious vibe. In other words, have the bridge musically feel more normal and melodic to contrast better--usually its the other way around! I know you probably aren't taking this back into production, but just an observation, and certainly only JMO. I could see David Bowie doing this song. Andrew's music interpretation is excellent with your lyrics! Well done both of you.
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