Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
No YOUR lyrics suck. You have zero understanding of how to structure a song, zero understanding of the tradition of blues.

You just think you are smarter than everybody. I dont know why that is, its proven over and over again you dont know what your talking about

MAB does not post his songs cause he thinks hes above that. People who put out albums dont, cause how would it look, you releaseing an album, and somebody saying something that the lyrics are weak

MAB was trying to do business, And just like, if you offer critique services for money, you dont tell the person they stink, you encourage them, that keeps the gravy train going. I dont think its anything sinister on his part, its just how you approach it

THAT is DOA here. NOBODY is doing business here. Except Demo people. And you werent going to see MIKE give his opinion of half the songs he recorded. that would be bad business

Time to get woke


It appears once again...you missed the point and derailed on some side street.

I know why MAB doesnt post here. At least, I understand the the supply and demand part of it. What you are blind to is why his opinion (and people with his background) on anything musical is so much more valuable than yours.

Which underscores why this site should not be the Fd School of songwriting and tell-it-like-FD-sees-it critiques.

By the way, MAB's name is Marc Barnette, What is yours?

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