Thanks for your input Travis.
It may sound dark in its treatment but it’s really about living life to the full before it goes.
Why do you think it needs a bridge though?

I would be reluctant to change it at the moment as local radio dj just contacted me and actually asked if they could play it after hearing it on Facebook. That must be a first for me. I always have to contact them first.

Vic

It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

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