Well... I have to say it... This is two in a row now...

I think whoever's doing your mixing is just taking your money.

This is definitely an Elvis Nash lyric! With an Elvis Nash vocal!
No problem there...

However;
I don't think the music really fits the rhythm and mood of the lyric. It's too mechanical and piecemeal, which makes the VOX seem forced. Yeah', there's a couple cool production tricks in there, but the overall effect seems very "Band In A Box" to me. Like, whoever arranged this, just picked a beat and made the lyrics fit... Like rap with a few samples strung together. It just doesn't feel natural and "organic" to me.

On the other hand, since you've been known to rap a bit, that may be the effect you're shooting for...?

Then, I think I'm hearing a phasing problem with the reverb? It sounds like echo in a coffee can...

Don't swing your knee out of joint lol... Remember to consider the source of this critique, I'm certainly no pro.
But, this lyric deserves a mix befitting your "talk/sing" style.