It's a pretty good pop melody for sure. And I think you did your best to make a book where there is none.

Wasting my time, the way you are singing the memodysounds much bigger and important than what is being said .

That hook could be ten times stronger with a good lyrical hook on that part

The guitar riff s so obviously U2, and I bet whatever software your using says With or without you, or some reference like that.

Doesn't fit right cause it's not that style.

But it sounds good, And if prefer the real vocals over ai

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 04/12/24 10:47 AM.