Originally Posted by JAPOV
"Who I Would Be"

Fantastic Concept! Really like it smile

However, it occurs to me;
Guys who live in cardboard boxes under the overpass, generally don't hang with friends in bars and have epiphanies about better living... while celebrating Halloween.

I think that verse should be about something more "universally relatable".

The singer character can certainly be down on his luck... just not THAT low wink

Hey Tony,

I hear ya, sir! I wrote this from my limited perspective. I dunno. Honestly, I would hope this would NOT be "universally relatable", however.

I'd rather NO ONE ever need have to know about this subject or experience it for that matter. Be that as it may, I don't think it too far a stretch for a story of a homeless guy who has a friend he talks to in a bar about Halloween and the regret he lives with. That's the joy of storytelling in song, right?

Thank you very much for the listen, kind words and feedback! I appreciate you!

Peace,

Dave

"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"