Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
"so we'll keep going somehow
feeling like a phoenix rising
they can kiss our ash now"

Overall, song is not on my wavelength, but I liked these lines a lot.
Keep in mind, a listener has to know what the Phoenix is about.

Marty


Thanks for the listen and feedback, Marty!! The song itself was written as a generic "Screw this, I'm out" anthem, but I can understand where you're coming from about the phoenix. I'll give it some further thought.

Peace,

Dave


"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"