Second listen; eyes closed.
The vocal hit on the beat is real get-in-their-head. It's the Rhythmic thing that made Sinatra famous.
Some syllables could use more emphasis.Some tweaks to pitch of Notes could be interesting, open to the singer to think about.
You need to 'cover' yourself singing this. The voice is engaging, a persona to perceive in it.
Seven 'hits' on THE Hook, the Title Line. Strong in memorability. They'll know what to ask for at the Record Shop, what to look for on the jukebo, request on the radio, the DJ.

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