Chas,

At first I wasn't sure how to approach this song.
But as it went on it just grew on me quickly..
especially the repeating "You Are"

I was thinking, not sure though about the first chorus being a little shorter.. more of a teaser..

But then i felt it just drives the song to hear it in full..

One thing I am sure of is this would sound great if one of my ALLTIME favorites was singing it.. Maurice White & Philip Bailey of EWF..

I think having someone in there style demoing the vocals.. would be great.. They are so unique (hard to find) anyone who can do that..
Your friend did do a nice job though..

This should be done IMHO with a total soulful approach!

I personally really liked this one the chorus is still in my head.. has a great feel to it,,the song is unique and old school to in a classic sense..

Peace
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Thanks!
Peace Mike
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