I have to agree with the above comments although through my studio monitors it sounds really good. My only criticism is that I think the strings were far too busy in the mix and sounded like something Band In A Box would have thrown up when I used to do my music on an Atari ST back in the olden days before real computers. Although it is a nice song I thought the synthetic midi perfect timing didn't do the song justice. If it was recorded with a full orchestra and sung by "as you admit" the right voice then you have a real contender. Only my opinion of course.